I'm writing a rap. wanna know if it's any god?

We gotta do something, work something out, we gotta get off this road somehow, it’s starting to get kinda old right now, you don’t understand ima rap for life. you better run cause I got nine lives, nothing to stop me to get in my way but you should just give up we all know you’re fake, it’s not something that you can hide from, you can’t just run away, now just let me ask something if I may has it always been this way, hiding all night and all day man you’re pathetic, now what ya no what ima get you but, ima do it slowly do it painfully bring it on heavily, I got something to show, come on lets go,hey are ya scared yo?!,ima do somethin crazy somethin that you don’t know, but its comin for sho